Essay Comments

Cynthia-I loved your blog on “What Is an American.” I really thought that you captured the essence of America in your letter, and I also like your style of writing. You provided lots of background information which is very helpful to someone who has never been to America, and expressed how great this country really is. I also thought that you incorporated the history of America into your essay as well. It all tied together. Good job!

Brittani-You really went over and beyond on this assignment. First, I would like to comment on your writing style. I thought you did a wonderful job of expressing America for what it really is..The land of the free and the home of the brave. Each quality was discussed in detail, and you promoted them at the same time. America is truly the greatest place to live, and I feel that you expressed that in your writing. Good job!

Angel-I thought you did an excellent job of portraying life in America to an immigrant thinking about visiting. You also followed directions and put your post in the form of a letter. I was a little confused last week, but after reading everyone’s essay, I now know what I was supposed to do. Thanks for the insight…very helpful. Also, I thought that you provided lots of detail for each specific thing you were talking about, as well as good grammar. Good job!

Terrance-Great job on your essay! I liked your writing style and thought that you provided detail and lots of information about America. I thought you writing was clear to understand, and gave the reader incentive to keep going.