Thursday, February 17, 2011

Essay Comments: Living a Full Life

Terrance: I really liked your essay. I agree with you on so many things, such as working your way up the ladder. People who have things handed to them, do not really understand the value of working for something. I thought that you had a very strong opinion and what it means to live a full life, but it was very nice to read. It showed that you were writing with passion. I loved it!

Cynthia: I enjoyed reading your essay on living a full life. For me, I gathered that it was about being with nature and experiencing all of the joys that it has to offer. Become one in harmony. I liked your writing style, although at times I felt a little lost in the reading. Could be me...probably is. Either way, I thought it was well written and very nice.

Angel: I liked your essay on living a full life. After reading your post, it appears that is what you did. It is always nice to be able to look back on life and not have any regrets. We are all only young once, so why not enjoy it? That's what I always say. Even though you didn't go to college when you first got out of high school, you are still setting a great example for your kids as you are doing something with it now. Good luck!

Brittani: I really enjoyed your essay on living a full life and what it means to you. I think we are very similar in what we need to be happy. Family and education are so important to me as well. In a way, they lay the foundation for the rest of your life. I also know first hand about trying to balance everything. I do not work full-time now but have in the past while going to school full time. It's definitely not an easy job, but it is all worth it in the end. Keep up the great work and stay focused on your dreams!

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